Need some serious oppinoons on a book idea (please dont act stupid about it)? - get indian escort in us
It is the near future (like maybe tomorrow) and India and Pakistan to war with each other. (This is) very well possible. The United States has a small detachment of Marines in India but were refused access to the war zone. A low yield nuclear warhead shells exploded in Pakistan and is threatening to start World War III between the two.
A rogue Russian general has recently entered into an agreement with China, a code name Advanced torpedoes: the turtle, which are not detectable by sonar.
U.S. President agrees to a small QRF (Quick Reaction Force) in the Indian Ocean and around to send the emergency area to try to stop them.
Subs intercept with the new Chinese naval forces equipped torpedo the U.S. (2-3 over the Escort) business and devastate.
The U.S. military extends around the world and is not in a position to assist anythijng Asia.
Invaded China (with N. Korea), South Korea, Taiwan, Spratley, Kaziskstan, Kajistan (both oil), and pressures on the nuclear threats in Japan
Wednesday, February 3, 2010
Get Indian Escort In Us Need Some Serious Oppinoons On A Book Idea (please Dont Act Stupid About It)?
6 comments:
Although it looks like a very dangerous stage, I think, would be the point for a good story, research, personal experience and that you as the main character (s).
I think it would be much work done on your part to ensure that he is writing a novel of military action, ala Tom Clancy scenario rather than a cartoon GI Joe.
As soon as I heard, "Rogue Russian general. Gefiel me, if you write such a book, avoid tired cliches can help you.
Not to sell ideas. The books are not the ideas - they are writing about right. Even the old ideas and write a better chance that good ideas is lacking in writing in a style, polish, competence and professionalism.
In addition, it looks like a film rather than a book.
If I were you, I begin by reading some classics of the war and see if you can write well.
Nothing on this earth, how to spend an editor, for money to get a "good idea" faces, is editor manuscript. How do they see the first is the quality of writing and thinking, "Oh ... and not a bad idea.
What publishers are looking for:
much of an actor (in his diary does not mention)
an anti-hero strong
an authentic sense of place
fewer things - more and more people
the proven ability to engage the reader
seamlessly plot with at least two sub-plots
You must have a written course you will understand a little bit, industrand - is relentless, unmountable, bad with the fans and hard.
Good luck.
Ok, you want to start in May correctly spell all words. Start with spell check early and often. This is good advice, not stupid. If you are honest opinion.
This book is a very, very hard to A) from b) to credibility.
Please note that as a book so completely unrealistic, if people completely lost. It is also very difficult, something so unrealistic, like a torpedo, which have produced no sound is central to the plot. My God, yes, he succeeded James Bond with total lack of realism, but it is an extraordinary success, do not know is possible with the current market.
Do not get me wrong, the idea seems interesting and I think you should go to specific projects and then apply for its revision. Even if the action was incredible and we all said, "Yes, writes," Where are we be if that were really bad typing skills?
does not seem very original to me. So far he has not said anything that makes the difference. What is your view on the original title of the war?
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